Friday, September 11, 2009

WHY DID THE CHICKEN CROSS THE ROAD? Friday Flash 55



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The idea is to write a story in exactly 55 words.
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At the salon, Galina thought she looked great after having her tail feathers fluffed, but Capone, the insensitive rooster, told her she looked fat in her new do.

Galina ---a little hard of hearing ---crossed the road because she thought Bovina Cow had said, "The ass is always leaner on the other side of cements."

(You have my permission to groan now.)
(©2009, C.J. Peiffer)

11 comments:

Prayer Girl said...

First a "groan" - thanks for giving your permission. :)

And next - what a neat and creative 55. Loved it.

PG

anthonynorth said...

A fun piece. I love play on words. Enjoyed it lots :-)

Hootin' Anni said...

That was quite unique....:::groan:::

Mine's posted too. As always, scroll down beyond my show n tell for Friday!

Dr.John said...

Groan! Groan! Groan!
I loved it. I just loved it.

Mine is posted

HERE.

.
it’s a groaner.

Chef Kar said...

Very cute ~ worth a chuckle instead of a groan! I loved it.

Mine is posted here.

Chef Kar

G-Man said...

Are you related to Dr. John?
hahahahaha....
Excellent 55 CJ....
Thanks for this little change of pace on such a historical day...
You Rock!!!
Have a Wonderful Week-End...G

Dulce said...

Good lesson!! So cute. I love it.

Alice Audrey said...

Grooooooan!!!


Good one. I'd have been right beside her.

Mona said...

LOL! That chicken's crossing the road, surely makes 'huge' sense!

Monkey Man said...

And groan I did. Thanks for the visit to my 55. I like yours too.

EG CameraGirl said...

Bwahaha! Clever!