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Saturday, May 16, 2009

STORMY WEATHER Part 2 - Short Fiction

This short story is in response to

How it works: Raven supplies two sets of words (or phrases) to use in a piece of writing. One can choose the ten- or five-word challenge ---or combine both into a fifteen word challenge.

Ten-word challenge:
green goddess, shampoo, filibuster, please and thank you, Operation Marigold, throw pillows, up the creek without a paddle, spandex, ubiquitous, wedding ring
(Words from the challenge are in bold face in the story.)

This is a continuation of  last week's entry:  STORMY WEATHER Part 1



STORMY WEATHER Part 2

Short Fiction


        It was barely light enough to see my way around the house. We should have kept a flashlight in a set location, but I couldn’t find one anywhere. I was on the verge of panic, feeling like I was up the creek without a paddle. In a way I was. Hurricane Ruth had caused Maple Creek to overflow and it was coming my way.

        The last thing I had seen on  TV before the power went out was a wall of water sweeping a news reporter off her feet. Sirens blared. Through the window, I saw flashing lights from emergency vehicles reflected in the windows of houses closer to the creek. Aurora Lane rose slightly at our end, so I hoped the water would not rise enough to reach the house. It was still raining hard.  

        I plowed through every drawer and closet in the house, eventually finding two  huge scented candles in glass containers. I never used candles because I thought they were fire hazards, but I had received several as gifts ---useless I thought, until I needed them. The apple pie aroma would have been great under different circumstances.

        I hadn’t heard from Parker. I tried my own cell phone. It worked, but I couldn’t get through to my husband.

        I called my sister Marigold. Parker always referred to Mari as the Green Goddess, because while he and I had black thumbs, Marigold could make a palm tree grow at the north pole.  She was scheduled to fly in the following week to visit and help me plant an herb garden. Parker called her annual garden-project visit Operation Marigold

        Mari lived 500 miles to the west. The storm was just a gentle rain in her area. My sister worked for a cell phone company and assured me towers have back-up generators and batteries, but, she explained, each tower can hold only so many calls. During a major storm, they can't accommodate the overload.  We finalized our plans for the next week, provided we weren’t under water.   

        I swear my sister would make a good senator. She could single-handedly keep a filibuster going for a week. Our  phone conversations usually ran for hours, but I rang off after thirty minutes, explaining I needed to move things to higher ground.

        Our home sat on a hill. The water would have to rise five feet above the street to enter the basement, but if it did the computer equipment I used as a freelance graphic artist in our family room would be ruined.  By the light of my two candles, I unplugged the computers, scanners, monitors, and printers, placing them on the highest steps I could reach. I gathered all the small items, the mouse, keyboard, wires, papers, backup disks and external drives into a large box and carried it upstairs. 

        Every few minutes, I looked to see what was happening outside while I tried to reach Parker. Each time, the water seemed closer than the last time, but since there were no street lights, it was difficult to tell.  By then, water was probably more than a foot deep where Aurora met Washington, the only way to drive to our house which sat at the dead end of Aurora. I tried calling my husband again. The call went to voice mail. I hit the redial, saying to myself, “Please answer, please, please, please” and “Thank you,” when he finally picked up.  He had just pulled into the school parking lot two blocks from home.


        “What’s going on out there?” I asked.

        “Traffic was crazy. They have Washington blocked off.”

        “I thought they would. Did you hear anything about that the reporter?”

        “The radio said she broke her wrist. Except for a few other bruises, she'll be okay."

        I waited at the window until I saw a flashlight bouncing up the street.  I opened the garage door to find Parker, soaked trench coat over trousers folded to his knees, his shoes, socks, and the flashlight from the car in hand. 

        “Come see,” he said, setting his shoes on the garage floor. I rolled up the legs of the pajamas that I had put on after being soaked in the rain earlier. I pulled on Parker’s high rubber boots and the rain slicker I had hung in the garage to dry. 

        The water had reached the bottom of our driveway. We waded down the street until the ubiquitous water reached mid-calf.  We could hear the distant motor of a generator. By flashlight, we saw the creek had flooded basements and was inching up porch steps. It looked like everyone close to the creek had evacuated. I could only imagine the messes they would return to after the storm. I wanted to cry.

        “Let’s get inside,” I said. “I’m freezing.” On the way back to the house, the rain died to a drizzle, but we knew that water from the surrounding hills would still flow into the creek which might continue to rise for hours. 

        Parker had been walking through water that might have overflowed from sewers, so he wanted to shower. He dumped his wet clothes on the garage floor and pulled me toward the bathroom where I peeled off my PJs and jumped into the shower with him. Quickly, we soaped and applied shampoo, then rinsed before the warm water ran out. 

        Parker put on fresh jeans and T-shirt while I opted for spandex leggings and a turtleneck. We ate sandwiches at my work table in the family room.  Parker occasionally took the flashlight to the door to see the water creeping up the driveway. He lit a fire while I anxiously watched the water lapping at the sliding glass doors where the basement floor was at its lowest point. At first water seeped into the room only an inch from the doors, then three, then seven. After we moved the first three pieces of furniture upstairs, the water stopped inching forward and began to recede.

        The power was still off. With our hectic schedules, it was a rare treat to prop ourselves on throw pillows in front of the fire and talk for hours like we used to do. We sipped mugs of hot tea, made with water heated in the fireplace. 

        In front of the fire, my husband’s face looked soft and young. His clothes took on a warm glow. His wedding ring sparkled with orange light. When he looked at me, Parker’s eyes reflected flames as if they, too, were on fire. 


(2009, C.J. Peiffer)

Saturday, May 9, 2009

STORMY WEATHER - Short Fiction

This short story is in response to

How it works: Raven supplies two sets of words (or phrases) to use in a piece of writing. One can choose the ten- or five-word challenge ---or combine both into a fifteen word challenge.

Ten-word challenge:
gentle spring rain, mammoth, soap opera, worry, bubble gum, garden gate, seizure, of Biblical proportions, paralysis, wrinkles
(Words from the challenge are in bold face in the story.)


I’m not sure if I will always do this, but I have chosen to continue with the same characters as I used last week, for my first attempt, "A Moving Moment."

STORMY WEATHER
Short Fiction

        After ten months of higher than average rainfall in our area, Hurricane Ruth headed up the coast, far north of the normal hurricane zone. This was not going to be a gentle spring rain. Parker and I had spent the previous evening rolling up the awnings and moving the potted plants, patio furniture, grill, and garden tools into the basement and garage.
        Midmorning, black clouds had rolled in. Then the troubled sky opened up. It sounded like someone had aimed powerful fire hoses at the house.
        I worked at home as a graphic artist. For two months, I had been preparing a major ad campaign for a bubble gum company. My worry was that the storm would cause a power outage, putting my project behind schedule. I worked on the computer all morning, saving my work every fifteen seconds in case the power lines went down.
        A little after noon, when it was already as dark as dusk, I allotted myself only twenty minutes for lunch. Between bites of a toasted cheese sandwich, I turned on the TV. I flipped channels, but there were no weather updates.
        I turned to a soap opera, the one I refer to as “The Young and the Rest of Us.” Suddenly, that slimeball Victor, who was in a hospital bed after a seizure, stopped in slurred mid-sentence, interrupted by a weather update.
        The reporter said. “Hurricane Ruth is a storm of Biblical proportions. Because the earth is already saturated to its limit, flash flooding is expected throughout the tri-state region. The Blue Heron River is expected to reach flood stage by seven this evening...”
        When we purchased our home, no one bothered to tell us that Maple Creek, only a block away, frequently overflowed its banks. Basements of homes a half block away were flooded occasionally, but luckily the water had never reached our house in the eighteen months we had lived there. After seeing the damage done to neighbors’ homes, we had opted for flood insurance, probably a wise decision.
        As I rinsed my plate, the wind kicked up. Looking through the kitchen window I discovered the garden gate whipping back and forth in the gale. I feared it would be pulled from its hinges.
        I searched under winter gloves, scarves, and hats on the shelf in the hall closet for my old rain slicker, flattened into a sheet of plastic wrinkles. I slipped it over my T-shirt and jeans, and ran into the yard with rope to tie the gate closed.
        Back in the house, I tore off my wet shoes and socks, and replaced my jeans, soaked from the knees down, with flannel pajama bottoms and slipped into fleece-lined slippers.
        I called Parker from my cell phone.
        “They let us leave early,” he said. “I thought I’d be home by now, but I guess everyone else left early, too. I haven’t moved one inch in the past hour. Every time it drizzles, everything gets jammed up. With this much rain, the whole city suffers from traffic paralysis.”
        I eyed the TV while he talked.
        “Hey,” I said. “A news truck is down the street at the intersection of Aurora and Washington. The creek is ready to overflow its banks.”
        “You’re breaking up,” Parker said. After some static, I heard him say, “...soon as I can. Love you,” before the call dropped.
        Within seconds, on the TV screen I saw a mammoth wall of water sweep the news reporter off her feet. Then the lights went out.

(Read the rest of this story in STORMY WEATHER Part2)
(©2009, C.J. Peiffer)